Looking for critique of manuscript

[eddie han]

I recently finished my novel called Parabolis, a steampunk fantasy epic.  I am currently collaborating with an artist to turn it into an illustrated book and pitching the project on Kickstarter here: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1784091043/parabolis?ref=category

In the meantime, I'm looking for anyone interested in reading the completed manuscript and giving me some honest feedback.  Outside of friends, it hasn't had any audience for me to accurately gauge its value as a narrative.  If you're interested and have the time to plow through it, I'd be very grateful.

Thanks in advance,

Eddie

https://www.facebook.com/Parabolis

http://parabolis.tumblr.com/

[Ettrick]

Not sure I can but I'll offer.  The time investment is my main concern as I have lots going on and a long-delayed commitment to Nicole Ross that needs finished.  My questions would be these:  How long is your work?  What is your deadline for our feedback?