My First Steampunk/Horror Short Story! "Redeux"

Just spent the better part of the night and early morning hours editing my short story, "To Whom Shall You Inquire?" You can view the updated version here at the link I have provided.

Please let me know what you think. I am desperately seeking constructive criticism. :-)

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Comment by Kent Edward Whittington on March 30, 2012 at 10:07am

Couldn't get the link to post with the entry.  here it is:

http://the-aerie.webs.com/apps/blog/entries/show/13475245-to-whom-s...

Comment by Jeremy Brandon Murphy on March 31, 2012 at 5:17am

     I love it! Especially the main character's discomfort at Isabella's choice of attire. Good work, sir.

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